"Jesse? Do you want to?” He asked me. I felt his warm hand wrap around my waist. This was scary. And exciting. Don and I’d come to the woods to be alone. Something difficult for us with our families being so interfering. I was sure I wanted to have sex. But with Don, it didn’t feel like sex. It felt like lovemaking and that wasn’t something I was prepared for. I didn’t know of Don felt the same way, even though every touch from him was tender. I finally turned, threading my fingers through his dark hair. “Love me, please.”
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I'm new at the flash fiction friday thing too, so I can't tell you if anything was wrong or not, but I can tell you it was good. Enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteAww sweet! very nice post :)
ReplyDeleteMmmm sexy flasher. Well done!
ReplyDeleteOMG, so powerful and lovely! This was a great FFF!
ReplyDeleteVery nicely done and another virgin in our mix - love it
ReplyDeleteAh, very sweet, loved it! Welcome to the group!
ReplyDeleteFor a virgin, you did extremely well. I love your writing style and the raw honesty in the piece. You're doing just fine. Well done!
ReplyDeleteCR, I think this is your first FFF. I know for sure it's my first visit to your Blog because I would have surely remember the pictures on your wall.
ReplyDeleteThis an excellent virgin FFF, it was hot and tender at the same time. It would be very interesting to peep inside of Don's head and hear what he's thinking right now.
Once again, well done and welcome to the group.
Nice first effort. Very sweet, and I love the uncertainty.
ReplyDeleteNicely done CR!!! :D
ReplyDeleteWell, I can tell you, it was well done! Great 100 CR
ReplyDeleteNice! The scenery is perfect for a little lovemaking. Very sexy post.
ReplyDeleteOh gawd this one was so romantic...sigh. absolutely loved this one! Thank you!
ReplyDeleteLove the conflict you've built here. Fantastic emotional FFF.
ReplyDeleteI think this picture spoke to quite a few of us in a romantic way whether we write m/m f/m , erotica or erotic romance or whatever. It was a good vibe and I like where you went with it. Good flash. See ya next week I hope.
ReplyDeleteAwe, young love! Nice FFF.
ReplyDeleteThat first time is always scary.
ReplyDeleteVery sweet - young love - sigh
ReplyDeleteMmm...Gets the heart pounding. Very nice. I wonder what will happen. ;-)
ReplyDeleteSweet, sexy and Awesome. Taking that first leap into trusting someone with your body and often with your heart..scary but exciting at the same time.
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