Thursday, March 8, 2012

Flash Fiction Friday

Tranquil Tuesday...or not

Welcome my friends to another Flash Fiction Friday where a group of creative crazies get together to write 100 words, no more, no less about a picture.

That’s my man. It’s Tuesday, his day off. His day to lounge in underwear, to tease me, to nap. He loves his day off, as do I. If I could only entice him from gazing out the window…and the hot neighbor across the way. I’ve caught him looking on more occasions than I like to admit. I haven’t the courage to ask about it. Does he still want me? Has he gotten bored?

My hands itch to show him my desire. My heart aches to show him my love. Why must he be glued to the window? I’m still here.




13 comments:

  1. You just gotta build up the courage! You can't be forever wondering what if ... Loved it

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  2. I loved this. One watching another, watch another and who knows? Maybe more. Desire can be such a paralizing element ~ for everyone. Loved it:) xo

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  3. Very good on making the emotions cling to that image. Great Flash!

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  4. awwww. Crawl up that man and force his attention on you!

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  5. I love the haunting quality in this one - makes me want so much more.

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  6. How moving. He longs for him so bad. I feel sad for him. Maybe he's still interested, but tired. One could hope.

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  7. What a lovely post! So emotional. Great FFF!

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  8. A day off! What a lovely dream ;-)
    Nice Flash!

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  9. Hmmm...timidity never won fair lad...

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  10. On his day off, and he’s staring out the window instead of caressing his lover? That’s messed up. Hopefully he doesn’t make a habit out of it. *grin* He keeps neglecting his lover and he’s gonna lose him.

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  11. I think I would be just a tad pissed if he spent his day off watching the neighbor instead of me. Guess he needs a wake up call. His partner should just climb aboard and fuck him silly so he remembers what he has at home. ;)
    Great FFF.

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